Monday, September 17, 2012

Daily Writing: a fragment of a horror story

Okay, so, inspired by my students who are writing scary stories at the moment to submit to a Halloween essay contest, I thought I'd write something a bit scary/creepy today just for fun because our internet was down and I just finished my also semi-creepy book.... 

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The Path

The pathway had always been there in Hayley's backyard. A dark place that she never went anywhere near when she was playing outside, and always seemed to become the subject of the ghost stories they'd tell at sleepovers when she was younger. When she asked her parents about it, they had always just brushed it off, as if they had gone down it a million times and even the idea of being worried or afraid was ridiculous. Yet from where Hayley sat in her kitchen, staring through the window, and across the yard at its entrance, she couldn't shake the feeling that something was just not right, and never had been.

So, why, after 17 years of always being careful to avoid it, she let her friends dare her into exploring it that night, she couldn't explain. As she stared out the window, the two creepy branches that always overhung its entrance from the mess of forest above shook in the wind and seemed to wave at her, menacingly, beckoning her into their clutches. But the reason she'd allowed herself to be talked into it was that it was Halloween, and due to the renovations being done on her friend Brandon's house this year, his annual party was not happening—so everybody needed another source of treat and trickery for the night. 

It had actually been Brandon, her longest friend, who was more than familiar with her backyard and all of its... features, that suggested the alternative plan. “Hayley's Haunted Walk” he called it, and invited everyone to a facebook event from his iPhone quicker than she could protest. Of course, after the event was posted, cancelling would make her seem like a party-pooper, so it was on. He'd even made an event description that pretty aptly described the creepy path, and joking about Hayley wandering to her DOOOOOOMMMMmmmmm. She had to admit, all the hype he wrote did make it sound spooky, and obviously, no one had anything else going on that night, since everyone had reserved it for Brandon's party that didn't happen, so the RSVP list was already at almost 50 people—most of their graduating class. She couldn't back out now. But the branches continued to claw at the air, and she couldn't help a momentary vision of her hair becoming tangled in them and Brandon's story coming to pass in a few short hours. 

Hayley looked around the kitchen taking stock of all the party supplies she'd bought. She had never hosted a party before, mainly because her house wasn't really that big, and her two much younger brothers meant their house was still pretty kid-focused, and thus, not ready to host a bunch of teenagers late at night. Plus, Brandon's house had pool tables, sound systems, the works, and since all of their friends were mutual, she'd never really had the need. What Brandon's house did not have, however, was a haunted, forbidden place in the backyard. She looked outside again, and watch a squirrel prance across the yard. She watched also as it came close to the path, and then bounded in a distinct circle to avoid it before darting off into the forest beyond. Even the animals avoided it. No amount of human superstition or silliness could explain even the squirrel's avoidance.

So, after her brothers and her parents left to go trick-or-treating, Hayley sat for the next 2 hours waiting for her guests to arrive, psyching herself up for going down the path that evening. Brandon was the first to arrive, of course, because she'd told him to come half hour early to make sure she had everything ready. She opened the front door to greet him. “Hayyyyley... I Vant to Suck your Blauddd!” he announced, sheilding his face with a red-lined cape just like Dracula did in the movies. He dropped the cape, “Or should I go for more of an Edward vibe? 'Ohhh.... Bellaaaaa' “ and with that he pretended to swoon against the porch. “More likely to get the ladies excited, eh?” he joked, raising his eyebrows in her direction. 

“Oh stop,” Hayley chided as she let him inside, “No amount of blood sucking is going to trick girls into falling for you, trust me.” She laughed, “besides, I need you to be totally focussed on coming to my rescue after I get attacked by the Creature from Lake Woodlands when I invade his path later. The ladies will have to wait for the Christmas party, maybe you can try the mistletoe again. Remember when...” she trailed off. All joking aside, she really hoped Brandon would rescue her, and thinking of her impending mission, she suddenly didn't really feel like teasing anymore. Plus, now that they had reached the kitchen, she could see the path again, outside. Waiting.

“What? Come on, pussycat, the girls were talking about that for months afterwards. I'll be a hit! As long as someone doesn't show up dressed as a werewolf and tries to out-do me with his six-pack, because then I'm screwed.” He lifted up his shirt to reveal his always on-the-skinny-side pale stomach, and prodded her with his elbow after she didn't look or even respond. She was transfixed on the path. Brandon saw her blank eyes staring right through him out the window, maybe he shouldn't have pushed her to do this after all. 
 
“Mreow?” he tried joking again, playing up her cat costume, “Look, if you don't want to do this, Hayley, just say so. It's just a joke, for Halloween, come on... people love haunted houses and monster legends and all that crap. Did you see that event description I wrote? Pure gold! 'Creature from Lake Woodlands'??? Hahaha... I even heard Meredith telling some kid she saw it when she was out rowing the other day. People are freaked. This is going to be awesome Hayley.” But still, she stared past him. 
 
“Look,” he grabbed her by the shoulders, “Snap out of it. This isn't like you. People are going to start arriving soon, and then the rest of the night will be a blast. Trust me, don't worry. Everything will be fine.”

But she wasn't so sure. Hayley couldn't help noticing the ring of dead grass around the path's entrance, and the twisting, thorny vines that seemed to overtake all the other plants near the path, and writhe like snakes when she wasn't looking directly at them, and the same waving branches, which now, in the dimming light, looked more like bony fingers than ever before. She shuddered and snapped out of the trance. “Yeah, it'll be fine,” she met his gaze, “It's fine. I'm fine. Let's put these coolers outside,” and she shook her head, and grabbed a handle. 

The guests slowly trickled in, and about an hour later, smuggled booze from people's parent's liquor cabinets, pop, punch, cupcakes, chips and candy flowing, people were ready for Hayley to brave the path. She stepped outside, and someone took her Coke out of the hand as she crossed the lawn to chants of “Hayley! Hayley! Hayley!” surrounded her. She felt like she was in a daze, and she felt like grabbing the hands that tapped her shoulders for encouragement as she passed like lifelines, and screaming for help. But all she could do was walk closer and closer to the path. Someone had thought to bring spotlights for outside—probably Brandon—she thought, as a momentary distraction from her fate, but the eerie shadows cast by the super bright bulbs just made her target seem more ominous because the light appeared to vanish as it crept over the edges of the path's entrance, so that all that lay beyond it was unknown darkness. 

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So I can't really seem to give anything an ending.... kind of a problem. well, they dont really have beginnings either, yet. just like fragments... interesting.

Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Daily Reader Writer #2: Inside

Okay, so today's entry was a Shakespearean love poem assignment where you were meant to describe your love in naturalistic terms (ie: without using similes and metaphors usually reserved for love poems) based on Shakespeare's "My Mistress' Eyes are Nothing Like The Sun". However, I am going to choose to bypass that assignment, and instead, write from July 3rd.

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ARE WE ALONE? PHILOSOPHICAL IMPLICATIONS OF THE DISCOVERY OF EXTRATERRESTRIAL LIFE by Paul Davies

Try This: Contact with extraterrestrials has been a popular theme in science fiction since H G Wells. Write your own alien-contact story but avoid movie cliches of reptilian monsters, malicious invaders, or cuddlesome ETs.

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Inside

"Because I told you not to open it, Sierra! I told you we should have called the police, or the FBI or the CIA or whoever deals with these kinds of things! You cannot blame this on me, or anyone but yourself!" Ryan lectured her again, before stalking into the kitchen in a frustrated rage.

Sierra thought back to the previous night. Had she really made such a poor judgement call? Her mother always said that her curiosity would get the best of her one day, and she certainly couldn't say that her motivation for opening the strange device had been motivated by anything but. Certainly not heroism or any other likely reason I person would take matters into their own hands after discovering an ancient capsule covered in strange glyphs at the bottom of a well in their backyard. She knew it was wrong, but she also knew that as soon as they called authorities, the thing would be whisked away to some secret laboratory never to be seen or heard from again, and she couldn't have lived the rest of her life just not knowing. But now look where it had got her.

 [ But now you know... ]

 The voice came again. Strange, yet familiar, and not exactly in her head, but not exactly outside of it either, like it was echoing nearby. She hadn't exactly told Ryan about the voice yet, but who would blame her? He was never really good at dealing with things like this anyway. Not the man you'd want to have around in a crisis, so to speak. He tended to overreact--not that this situation was in any way okay.

She glanced at her fingers, as if hoping it would all have been a dream and they would be back to normal. But instead, of course, she saw the same strange scaly blue pattern, and it was already a bit deeper in hue than it had been this morning, and she swore it was closer to her knuckle that it had been, too. She checked to see that Ryan had, in fact, stormed off, and she could now hear him stomping around upstairs, so she was sure he wouldn't be stepping into the room to finish his rant. She reached down with her strange fingertips and pulled back the edge of her tanktop. Sure enough, the blue patch on her stomach was also darker, and the scale pattern more prominent. It had also increased in size by at least 2 inches around.

The strange rash had appeared late last night in all the places where the pod had touched her bare skin. Ryan had almost convinced her to give up, that it was simply an object, not a container as she suspected, when she finally managed to pry it open by bracing it against her midriff, and pulling hard at the diamond-shaped crust at the front of the pod. But that is the exact moment that they both blacked out, and when they woke up, collapsed together on the floor of the barn as few hours later, the object was gone.

[ But to where...? ]

The voice again, encouraging her curiosity.

"Stop it!!" she yelled at the bodiless presence. But then she clamped her hands over her mouth as Ryan walked into the room.

"Stop what?" he asked, a puzzled look on his face.

"Nothing. Nothing," Sierra replied, reaching to straighten the coasters on the edge of the coffee table.

There was a small pause, as if Ryan was presenting her with the opportunity to confess, but instead, he was the one to come forward, "Sierra, I have to tell you something, and I'm sorry for getting so upset, but I can't... deal with this. Look." he pulled up his sleeve to reveal five perfect spots of light blue on his forearm.

"Right where I touched you last night to wake you up in the barn."

"Yeah, and look what else," He turned around and slid his shirt off over his head. His entire back was covered with streaks of blue, very faint, but definitely there. "That's from last night too, you were restless in your sleep, and you kept reaching out for me. I would have woken you, but you always calmed down once I turned over, I didn't think anything of it."

Sierra said nothing. She felt for the edge of the sofa without looking away from Ryan, and slowly lowered herself to the seat. She had to tell him about the voice. Whatever this was, whatever she had done to herself, it was spreading. Contagious. Alien. Bad enough that she had infected herself, but now Ryan as well? She had to tell him. They had to figure this out, before it got worse.

"There's a voice." She stated.

Ryan paused, pulling his shirt back down and coming around to take a seat on the armchair opposite her. She looked up at him, met his eyes and gauged his body language. He was on edge. Well, better now than later, she figured. "Not all the time, but sometimes. In my head. Like it's speaking to me, but, I've never heard it before last night."

He didn't give the reaction she'd been expecting, but now she looked closer at his eyes and they seemed sort of glazed over. Denial. "What do they say?" he asked.

"Nothing, really. Just like, comments, on what's going on. It's only happened a few times. All I know is that the voice seems.... foreign. I guess I can't explain it. Just that, it's like it's someone talking to me, only there's no one there, and it's like they're far away."

[ Not as far as you think. ]

"There! Oh my god, did you hear it?"

"Hear what? The voice? What did it say?"

"It said, 'Not as far as you think.' "

"What like, not as far as you think it's far away?" he proposed, "Oh fuck. Sierra. Fuck. Fuck. Fuck," he was on his feet now, pacing back and forth in quick little steps and running his hands through his hair.

[ Already here. In you. Just wait. Tomorrow. ]

Then Sierra screamed.

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Love District 9, maybe this was a bit of a rip-off, but I think that's what I liked about it. It challenged what you'd think of as a "typical alien movie", and I think it brought up interesting ideas about how the introduction of aliens to our world cause human beings to change the way they see themselves, and especially in this situation, what does it really mean to be other?  Can you become other? and what is it like to make that transition? What goes through someone's mind as their perception of what is other is slowly merged with their perceived notion of self (or terrestrial, in this case)? I suppose in that way, this is very body-snatchers-esque as well, but I just find that concept fascinating, so... yeah! Day 2 complete!


Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Daily Reader Writing #1: Among Monsters

SO! Due to lots of spare time in my new move to Houston, I am going to endeavor to make a solid effort towards improving my writing, or at least practicing it. I bought a book at Chapters (on clearance, of course, it was $2), which has a daily segment of literature upon which to reflect, and then a writing challenge as a follow-up. I'm going to start today, with September 11th, and we'll see!

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THE VOYAGE OF ARGO by Appollonius of Rhodes

TRY THIS: The ancient myths have been retold many times. Select a story and retell it in a modern context.

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 Among Monsters

I stared into the glass, critiquing those aspects of myself that no one else would ever see twice. My wide brow and large green eyes, inherited from my father who was always too proud to claim his monstrous daughters as his own, my full lips and high cheekbones from my mother, whose beauty is spoken of only in whispers because her womb has only bore creatures. And creature I am. It took a long time for me to come to terms with that, because what girl doesn't dream of a future filled with happiness? But my past had not shown me happiness, and my future was definitely not looking too bright.

I turned from the window, careful to avoid the small mirror I kept on my bedtable to remind me of my limits, and walked to the salon. The apartment was quiet, like always, and as I sat on the sofa, Pyranee jumped into my lap. "Mmmrrrrao?" she encouraged, playfully. Pyranee always knew when I needed cheering up. Blinded in a fight with some feral animal, and abandoned by her previous owners, Pyranee and I had both experienced our fair share of unhappiness, but she always seemed to have more optimism than me.

"Oh, Pyraneee," I sighed, rubbing her head in that exact place I knew she liked. She started to purr. If only my troubles could be solved with a thoughtful head massage, but a hisssssssss from near my left ear reminded me of how impossible that would be. They never seemed to like it when I spent time with Pyranee. Probably because they somehow knew that she made me a tiny bit happy, and their sole plot in life was making me miserable. As if snakes have such moral reasoning. But I swear I will never forget when Pyranee jumped on top of the fridge that one night, and one of them tried to lash out and bite her--which would have killed her instantly. So I am not too easy to forgive anything they do--purposefully or otherwise.

There was nothing on TV anyway, and as I flipped through the channels the snakes writhed impatiently around my shoulders. For creatures so adept at mimicking my moods and behaviors, I would have loved if they picked up on my small happiness as well, but no, only in anger, frustration, despair and boredom were they content to amplify my feelings. The bastards. A longer one on my right even came around within my field of vision for a bit, staring at me as if to say, "How pathetic." Criticizing me for spending yet another night on the couch alone.

But one look at Michael in the corner and my thoughts of getting out of the house vanished from my mind. No, this was safer. Only this way would no one get hurt. Only this way would that never happen again. My loneliness was a small sacrifice for the ability of others around me to survive. Though every time I think of Michael I am brought back to that night, which I despise. The snakes started riling up and hissing at even that flicker of self-loathing that went through me. As Pyranee wandered off to explore the kitchen, I wandered over to the stone man. I reached out to touch the side of his face and brushed his cheek with a tenderness I knew I could never again show a real man. The snakes hissed again at the gentle gesture, disapproving. This is where my love would get a man: a place of honor in the corner of a living room, for the rest of eternity. All hope of a future gone in an instant. I kept him with me always both as a reminder to myself of the price of my happiness, and in the secret hope that one day I would find a way to bring him back, and end the curse.

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Well, that's all for today! Feel free to comment, or join me in this writing adventure and write your own. I don't know many myths, but the story of Medusa has always been interesting to me... Bye for now!